The-Afro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness - Preloaded II]

Nice Flash

It takes ages for the preloader to come up because it has to load that music at the begining. Take it out andit'll be fine :P

LYRONMARTIS responds:

I might just do that!

[LoL: Oh Yes And Spiders]

Nice!

Long but awsome ;)

Emptygoddess responds:

I've already made a that's what she said joke about this statment, so i won't make another one.

[Give Me Some Skin]

Good.

Nice Simple. Lip Syncing was spot on for what was said. :)

warefish responds:

Really? I thought it was a little off...

For a first attempt at lip syncing, that really means allot. :D

Cheers!

[THe Stick Hero]

File size too big for the content!

8.6MB! just for that! This flash generally needs everything to be better. It was too short, there was little and poor animation and the graphics were bad awsell. Try practicing how to animate different things like fights before you submit something else. Also try using an music editing software to shorten the music down so it reduces the file size.

Da-Arwin responds:

The file size was large because I didn't bother editing the music, and I made it top quality sound files or something like that. But yeah, I'll try to work harder on my next submission.

[3 Madness Kill Tests]

Pretty Good

Continue this, just one thing... Did you use a type of V cam in this... just watch out for the shape of v cam when using it as if the size of it changes your movie can look stretched and or fat like some parts in this.

Other than that good stuff :P

nggangsterpimp responds:

yea the vcam messed up some parts. thanks tho. :D

[An Anticipation Tutorial!]

Nice!

Cool i liked it!

M1CKEH responds:

Thanks, glad to help.

[Sonic: M.S Strikes Back 2]

Just 2 thing...

It was a pretty good sprite movie just 2 things to make it a whole lot better.
1.Simply for the fight scenes you need 'camera shakes'.
2.Best way to do this is a v cam this will able you to zoom in and also do the camera shakes by moving the vcam around and increasing size etc.

These will make your fight scenes a whole lot more exciting :)

If you need any more information just PM me :)

speedteirusu responds:

Thx, but we actually used it. XD

[A box full of Stuff]

Good just one thing

Cool just needs some more sfx and action in it. And also has anyone noticed if you go into the clay section menu then click the back to the menu button it goes to the 3D menu?

GAMECUBICLE responds:

i dont think it needs sfx. it would just be anoying, its about the movies anyways.

and i'll fix the button thingy, thanks